Korrekturlesen LETTER OF MOTIVATION Englisch

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Hallo und guten Abend!

Ich sitze heute schon einige Zeit, da ich eine Bewerbung für ein Praktikum in einem Hotel in China verfasse. Habe Lebenslauf schon fertig u bin beim Letter of motivation ...

Da ich heute schon so viel gelesen hab u ich schon ziemlich durcheinander bin kommt mir schon alles richtig vor ...

LETTER OF MOTIVATION

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing with reference to the possibility of obtaining work experience within the front office department or the sales and marketing department of your hotel Hainan Kangle Garden.

I have completed my A-level at the Salzburg Tourism Schools Klessheim in 2005 and I currently study at the FHWien University of Applied Sciences of WKW business management in Vienna. In 5th term, all students attend a 15 weeks national or overseas work experience as this scheduled in the university curriculum. Personally, I would really like to be one of the students, who do their work experience overseas because foreign experience is very important for me and my life goals.

As you can see from my CV, I can offer a considerable amount of relevant work experience. In 2004 I worked in a famous five star hotel in the Caribbean for over 2 months and gained a lot of foreign experience. I really enjoyed my trainee programme in St. Lucia and when I went back to Austria I was sure, that this foreign traineeship was not my last in live. I have never been to China, so it would be a pleasure for me to work in our hotel as a management trainee. I am very familiar with a variety of computer software, including Excel, Microsoft Word and FrontPage. I have my own successful eBay shop for more than 3 years now and have very good skills in working with computers and on the internet on general. As your hotel provides an 18 hole golf course, I could assist at golf lessons or arrange some trial lessons for hotel guests, who are interested in trying to play some golf as well.

Additionally, I have excellent English language skills. In school, I went to the special English class, where I had more English lessons and did several projects like language studies in Cambridge. During my work experience in the Caribbean I learnt also a lot English, especially for the hotel business.

I am very keen to apply my skills and experience to your five star hotel in Hainan China, as my career goal is to become a project manager, who is responsible for opening new hotel resorts. I would be also very interested in the organisation of big events in the hotel business.
Therefore I am highly interested in the following tasks regarding the launch of new resorts and the marketing of new hotels:

• Discussion of hotel guests requirements in future
• Guest views: Motivation for booking a special hotel
• New trends in the hotel and tourism business

I am also especially interested in travelling abroad und get to know foreign countries. I have been on holiday in Miami, Cape Town or for example in Dubai and experienced different cultures and stayed in different hotels, where I had perfect opportunities to look into the hotel business. I experienced hotels as a guest and as a staff member.

I look forward to hearing from you and would welcome the opportunity to discuss my application in greater detail.

Yours sincerely,

NAMEN GELÖSCHT

Vielen Dank für eure Mühen ...

11.07.2007, 21:25 Uhr - Editiert von AVS, alte Version: hier

Korrekturlesen LETTER OF MOTIVATION Englisch (maschti am 11.07.2007, 20:52:50)

Re: Korrekturlesen LETTER OF MOTIVATION Englisch (mko am 11.07.2007, 21:06:59)

Re(2): Korrekturlesen LETTER OF MOTIVATION Englisch (maschti am 13.07.2007, 11:25:18)

Re(3): Korrekturlesen LETTER OF MOTIVATION Englisch (mko am 13.07.2007, 11:38:22)

Re: Korrekturlesen LETTER OF MOTIVATION Englisch (Bucho am 12.07.2007, 01:56:21)

Re: Korrekturlesen LETTER OF MOTIVATION Englisch (Guten Tag, was kann ich gegen Sie tun? am 13.07.2007, 14:55:26)

Re(2): Korrekturlesen LETTER OF MOTIVATION Englisch (maschti am 16.07.2007, 12:25:09)

Re: Korrekturlesen LETTER OF MOTIVATION Englisch (matrix am 16.07.2007, 13:18:34)

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